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I used yellow for repetition, blue for key words and green for pointing words. I found that I have a ton of repetition within my essay and probably not enough pointing words in my body paragraphs which leads me to use a lot of repetition of the words arts and sciences.

My key words are also generally repeated often, which should be changed within my essay. I think I need to work on this a lot because my ideas seem repetitive if I only switch a few words around.

I think the three things I chose to highlight are all intermixed within my problem of repetition and its shown more when. highlight it like this.

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